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My First Time

Gnawed nails dig into worn plastic armrests Stinging alcohol burns the skin A sharp point glints in the fluorescent light Rough hands grip the shoulder Restraining it against the comfortless chair He says to relax, But the tremors intensify. Deep breath Lungs release Cartilage crunches Blood flows Shiny metal ring Rests against the ear A new opening in the body Diverging from natural design.

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Date: 1/20/2014 4:08:00 PM
That's frightening. Way to express it! The last two lines... amazing... the whole piece is great. So glad I stumbled across your work today! Always, Laura
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