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My First Sonnet

Love made me forlorn It left me all alone. I am still being towed by memento’s rope. While there are no signs of hope. I always showed my true feelings , which I still have for her. I never let her face ever whatever was bad for her. I let always myself tested on every touchstone. But one day I came to know all this would be my tombstone. To bury all this in oblivion is like urging for mercy killing. It’s not possible by anyone else to let that void filling. I still feel her in my every breath n heartbeats. My lips still make that blushing curve whenever in my dreams she meets. she still makes me feel the love while she is now nowhere. Just like worship the almighty ,whom we can’t see anywhere.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/18/2016 11:21:00 PM
Prasoon Jain, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Prasoon Jain
Date: 10/18/2016 11:36:00 PM
Hi..I am feeling great to be here. Thanks for your warm welcome. I am poet from heart.. Without any dirt... I like one trend... To be a good friend.. My new poetfriend skat... Poetry soup is great... Haha..howzzat Now please add few lines in this...
Date: 10/18/2016 9:53:00 PM
nice try, I applaud you, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Prasoon Jain
Date: 10/18/2016 11:06:00 PM
Thanks my dear friend. I will definitely read your poems. If I say about my poetic skills I will say poetry is my surrogate.I love to write all my thoughts,feelings,imaginations without thinking about Grammer n all. But I write in different sections like love,sorrow,bravery,motivation etc. Yes we can do great in poetry if we support each other.
Date: 10/16/2016 5:09:00 AM
This beautiful. Loved it......Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love...........//Manmath.........
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Prasoon Jain
Date: 10/18/2016 11:10:00 PM
Thanks my friend for your encouraging feedback. I'll try to do the best.

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