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My First Sin

"Each experience is locked within my heart and only I hold the key..." that will open the doors of my soul for you to see.
It was a cold October night and my parents were in a fight. you and I we were tight.
I met you beneath the willow tree where you said you'd be.
Nervous, anxious and wanting to run I looked into your eyes and I was done.
Sitting there on that hill everything was still.
My heart was racing and my palms were shaking.
You leaned in and that was the night of my first sin.
We sat close and snuggled all night with the moon shining bright.
As puppy love showed its face you got to first base.
8-20-2011 A Fragment of Life Cory long

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/28/2011 1:13:00 AM
hahaha. I was wondering if you really sinned and then got to the cute ending. This is adorable. Congratulations.
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Date: 8/27/2011 8:48:00 PM
An awesome poem -a winner -very expressive. I am charmed. I, however, searched where the sin is and couldn't find it. Thanks also for your encouraging comments on my poem Loveless Life. -Mohammad
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Date: 8/27/2011 7:05:00 PM
Oh, I remember it the times well. Nicely done. Lee
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Date: 8/26/2011 5:11:00 PM
Congratulations Cory on your 2nd place win in my contest with this wonderful poem~~
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Date: 8/26/2011 5:02:00 PM
Very endearing! such a nice memory and surely no sin ;) Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 8/25/2011 6:37:00 PM
And now you can forgive yourself. We all need our hearts off the shelf. And in the early dawn of life. First base is how you get home to your wife.
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Date: 8/25/2011 5:21:00 PM
Awwwwwww, Cory. So your first sin was ACTUALLY sneaking out of the house!? So tender an great couplets to boot! Gwendolen
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Date: 8/25/2011 4:56:00 PM
Many congrats to you, Cory : )
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Date: 8/25/2011 4:27:00 PM
Love this Cory-really tells the story well. Impressive!
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Date: 8/25/2011 2:42:00 PM
Great win! Good for you!! Tony
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Date: 8/25/2011 2:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Constance's "A Fragment of Life" contest Cory. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/25/2011 1:58:00 PM
Congrats on your win! Very sweet.
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Date: 8/25/2011 12:16:00 PM
Congrats on your indepth touching winner,Cory blessings Paul
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Date: 8/25/2011 12:10:00 PM
Congrats on your win in this great contest..Sara
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Date: 8/25/2011 11:00:00 AM
congrats cory on a special second place win with this dynamic poetry my friend.. enjoy luv..
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Date: 8/25/2011 10:39:00 AM
Congratualtions on your high win. Joyce
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Date: 8/25/2011 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Cory
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Date: 8/25/2011 10:02:00 AM
Congratultions on your worthy win Cory, with this beautiful write
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Date: 8/25/2011 9:39:00 AM
hey Cory congrats on your win, great poem David
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Date: 8/21/2011 11:44:00 AM
A beautiful first sin, Cory. I like this very much.
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Date: 8/21/2011 6:01:00 AM
what a divine moment sealed with your sweet, breataking lines, cory... winning wishes..;) huggs, nette
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 8/21/2011 6:02:00 AM
*breathtaking*

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