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My First Love At First Sight

Her eyes captured Angels flew by Persuading my soul Almond shaped Delicately demure My heart gasped Seductively lost Breaching my spirit She fulfilled my passion. written by Cecil Hickman written for Sponsor Michael J. Falotico Contest Name "Eyes First Meet" contest ******** 3 Senryu's only

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/30/2011 9:06:00 AM
a beautiful write, enjoyed it
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Date: 3/27/2011 11:33:00 AM
I love the way you see the angels passing by as your eyes meet, Cecil. A very passionate poem that should do well in Michael's contest. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/27/2011 10:43:00 AM
Wonderful entry to the contest, Cecil
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