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My First Love 1st Prize Award Wining Poem African Love For All Awards

My first love is a whore but i want her back because she always had my back when everyone threw me back, barked, nagged disappeared continuously on me just because, i try and cry to make them understand how i feel about them My first love is a whore but i want her back because the love apple, love bite, and her loving kindness, makes me lovesick, and unloved to other love birds, that promiscuously convey my way, to convict my heart. My first love Is a whore But I want her back because she has not false me but she has inherently taken me the way I am So I am also readily convinced to take her the way she is into my love life My first love Is a whore But I want her back for I now known that those whom I took as the goal keepers of my life 'my friends' Imprisoned my affections for my first love, overstretched my suspicion, and tore my first love's glossy fondness, into unscrupulous odiousness My first love Is a whore but I will become a fishmonger Just to fishnet her back into my life, because I truly want back my first love even if she is going to come back without her love, but with her heart that will serve Just to see and be with her again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/4/2012 8:40:00 AM
nice poem..congrats!!
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Femi Joey Oloidi
Date: 8/4/2012 1:19:00 PM
Awww Mary Paz thankiroooo! Woah! U are such a beauty,I adore your profile picture. Really, your face and smile, is as smooth as the flesh of the stars. Take care beauty!*flowers from me*smile on star. Kingfemi
Date: 8/4/2012 6:45:00 AM
Beautiful written poem - congrats on your win - have a lovely weekend - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Femi Joey Oloidi
Date: 8/4/2012 6:57:00 AM
Thanks Anne Lise , because without you all, I can't win. I learn from you all, this makes you all winners. Thanks, *lot of love* Kingfemi
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Femi Joey Oloidi
Date: 8/4/2012 6:46:00 AM
Thanks mighty David. Kingfemi.
Date: 8/4/2012 4:16:00 AM
Femi, congrats, I like it...David
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