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My First Date

My First Date contest-sponsored by Carol Brown 7-2-2011 My First Date It was the summer of 1988 the year of my first blind date. not really a date, more of a favor for another day of dating service guy's labor. Not one thing in like except we both own a bike. In a way I feel sad for powdered blue polyester clad Tad Conversations on bugs plastic pen holders, and build your own mugs. Glancing up at the numbers the hands straight and tense trying hard to focus on the cloudy, cracked coke bottle lens. The food was the only good made up for the sighs A cold, clammy handshake only 2 words too many-"good-bye." Racing inside I walk to my car. Tad hops on his bike honks his rubber loud horn. I politely honk back can't wait for the new morn.

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Date: 7/16/2011 8:16:00 AM
I remember this one from reading it before. Congrats on your win, Jenny.
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Date: 7/15/2011 6:13:00 PM
Thanks everyone! - I'm really enjoying posting/reading your poems on here! You are all very gifted poets and I feel so honored to be a part of this forem!:)
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Date: 7/15/2011 3:46:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of Carol, Jenny
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Date: 7/15/2011 2:06:00 PM
Congrats jenny on your terrific third place win in first date with this dynamite entry luv..
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Date: 7/15/2011 12:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest and thank you for supporting my contest Jenny. Love, Carol
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Jenny Emelander
Date: 7/15/2011 1:10:00 PM
Thanks Carol!
Date: 7/2/2011 10:38:00 PM
This was so funny, you in a car and him on a bike? What a weird first date you had!! (not sure but check the rules. I think she said just do narrative or bio style). Anyway, I sure enjoyed this.
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Jenny Emelander
Date: 7/4/2011 9:24:00 PM
Thanks Andrea!

Book: Shattered Sighs