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My First Car

My First car I bought my first car; a Burnt golden Daf An automatic vehicle that did not cut a dash The seats folded flat We could make use of that But when the brake failed, we hit the stream with a splash.

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Harry Horsman

Date: 3/24/2012 3:34:00 PM

i missed this one, excellent limerick, harry

Sean Kelly

Date: 3/21/2012 4:17:00 AM

Mandy , I actually had one of these , many moons ago and when I sold it 2 years later , managed to make a small profit on the deal .Hope you have dried out , since then and best of luck in the contest . Beeep beeep ....

Judy Ball

Date: 3/13/2012 1:48:00 PM

Nice job Mandy. Cute as a button with great imagery. Made me smile. God Bless and thanks so much for your comments on My First CAR. JB

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/4/2012 5:53:00 AM

bet that was scary! Thanks for stopping by my writes. Light & Love

Brenda Victoria Northeast

Date: 3/4/2012 3:56:00 AM

That's such a laugh, wonderful images and great fun, loved it, brenda : 0

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/4/2012 2:09:00 AM

laughing out loud, mandy... soo cute and well done... just posted mine for this contest and called my car Stardust... but yours is really grrreat!... your daf is a winner!..: huggs!

Deck Fitzgerald

Date: 3/3/2012 3:40:00 PM

Big smiles Mandy luv and much enjoyed , Declan xxx ( mail )

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 3/4/2012 2:05:00 AM

Thanks Dec will be in touch xxooxx

James Fraser

Date: 3/3/2012 1:09:00 PM

Nice one Mandy, and oh! my the images. Limericks are fun to write, I like this one. Have a great evening & Sunday :) James

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 3/4/2012 2:08:00 AM

Thanks James , srub you mind out you bad boy ,we learnt how to drink sherry in that carXX

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/3/2012 11:13:00 AM

To celebrate the very first car seems like a great idea for a contest! A mighty fine limerick, Mandy. It just might steal the show! Gwendolen

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 3/4/2012 2:06:00 AM

Thank you Gwen what a lovely thing to say xxooxx

The Situation

Date: 3/3/2012 9:10:00 AM

cute. i liked this. it worked unlike some disASTERS I'VE SEEN ON HERE

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 3/3/2012 10:42:00 AM

Thank you,

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 3/3/2012 1:02:00 AM

Mandy, very nice limerick. Best of luck on Carol's contest.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 3/3/2012 7:05:00 AM

Thanks Samual xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/2/2012 3:46:00 PM

Splash.... Good one Mandy :) - luck to you in contest.Have a lovely weekend. - oxox Anne-Lise

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 3/3/2012 7:05:00 AM

Thanks ann lise xxooxx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/2/2012 2:23:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this one today..Reads like a winner if for the contest...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 3/3/2012 7:06:00 AM

Thank you sara and congrats on all your wins xx

Judy Ball

Date: 3/2/2012 1:15:00 PM

Ooohoohoo! What a sad ending to your first car. I wrote one too by the same name. Great write and fine entry for the contest. Good luck. God Bless, JB

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 3/3/2012 7:07:00 AM

And same to yo u Judy, boy I did love that car xx