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My First Car

At twenty, a sophomore in college I bought my first car A forty seven Chevy club coop It was clean and up to par Of course, it had to be personalized So I lowered the rear end Put on fender skirts and a Smitty That rumble would make me grin All the interior lights were blue I thought that was cool But everything wasn’t so perfect At times that car was cruel The car had what’s called a vacuum shift A faulty design at best It would lock in gear, you couldn’t shift What causes it, a guess? The only way to get it unlocked Is to rock it forward and back That was more than a one person job It would unlock with a crack It would happen at the worst of times Like when I’m out on a date Asking your date to help rock the car Didn’t always turn out great Something special about my first car Just getting it was a thrill But at the times when it would lock up It’s a car I could just kill

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/8/2011 4:11:00 PM
Great mixture of feelings toward the car..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 9/7/2011 11:01:00 PM
Ah, great poem. Congratulations on your win. Well done. Lee
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Date: 9/7/2011 8:21:00 PM
yesNOT funny at the time..I bet..all our 1st cars were mostly heaps but they got us away from home YEAH! Congrad's on your win! light & love
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Date: 9/7/2011 5:02:00 PM
They are only good when they are running. Congratulations on your win. Joyce
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Date: 9/7/2011 12:33:00 PM
hey Charles congrats on your win..David
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Date: 9/7/2011 10:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in this contest Charles. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/7/2011 10:36:00 AM
Congrats Charles on your big win with this cool write luv..
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Date: 9/7/2011 10:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the "Driving Me Crazy" poetry contest sponsored by Paula Swanson. CR
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Date: 8/26/2011 1:27:00 PM
Lovely thoughts recollected in tranquility, Charles
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