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My First Acrostic

T-ake my hand sweet doll, R-un with me,till we are O-n our way to love spot. U-ntill the sun goes down B-enders of time we be L-oving eachoda without E-nd till we turned to mist Note: Iwas moved by different attempts some wonderful poets made. It spurred me into action. Hope It was well penned.

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Date: 11/27/2013 12:17:00 AM
Hi Bob, Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. You know me I’ will always enjoy stopping by with love and support, no matter if I do not Understand what I am reading at times. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA
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Date: 10/16/2013 2:32:00 PM
This was a beautiful acrostic poem! You did a great job on your first attempt! Nicely done!...The first acrostic that I had ever written, actually ended up winning first place in Andrea's recent contest!...So, I have learned to not underestimate myself, and you shouldn't either!...Thank you very much for the kind comments. I really appreciate it!
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Date: 10/7/2013 3:57:00 AM
- Your first acrostic is really beautiful! - I visit you early yesterday ... would see if you had written one - but you had not posted it then. - Well done, Bob! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/6/2013 8:05:00 PM
Your first Acrostic is well pinned. Love it, trouble is still my middle name..LOL... love this one I Bob.,,, always~ Linda
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