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My Final Hour

What is this she holds in blooded redded colour In empty look I realise that my hearts in consumed devour For inside my chest it rested, a now open abyss appears Pains of hurting scream as she revels through her cheers Calculated and callous, the ***** within her shines Confirming men and me in unison, in total undermine As I fall to my knees in blooded redded colour She's callous torn and twisted, as I live my final hour http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/life-15.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/1/2011 9:09:00 AM
My heart constricts reading such deep emotions...nice write my friend...luv shannon
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Date: 8/27/2011 8:27:00 PM
a great write~~~~feel the hurt~~~smile for the glory of your written masterpiece~~~*-*junjun
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Date: 8/27/2011 8:17:00 PM
I can feel the pain and see the blood...good write!
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Date: 8/27/2011 8:01:00 PM
Reads like a tough one for sure..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara
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