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My Feet

feet are getting old thread veins wrinkled calloused skin taking me with them

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/17/2021 1:51:00 PM
Been a while; how are you Viv?
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Date: 8/14/2018 5:50:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest. Sara
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Date: 7/12/2018 9:21:00 PM
Incredible how you put so much feeling into three lines! I like your poems! :)
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Date: 7/9/2018 9:40:00 AM
So right you are. Since long feet are carrying me. Well thought.
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Date: 7/9/2018 3:31:00 AM
A senryu many of us can relate to Viv! It is great to be reading your poetry tonight. : )
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Date: 7/7/2018 6:25:00 AM
We've walked a million miles at our ages...excellent, Viv!
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Date: 7/1/2018 2:26:00 PM
OH My, the feet now too? I am appalled to see the spider veins in my upper thighs. Good grief!!! Good one, Viv.
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Date: 7/1/2018 1:27:00 PM
Incredibly clever Viv
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Date: 7/1/2018 9:59:00 AM
Witty relatable pen! xomo :)
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Date: 7/1/2018 7:30:00 AM
Getting on in years sucks, when I reach 70 I'll opt for a total body transplant of a twenty year old.
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Date: 7/1/2018 5:33:00 AM
I love my feet and I thank them each day for taking me places. I am glad you wrote about feet today, Hope all is well, have a good day Viv.
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Date: 7/1/2018 3:25:00 AM
oh you've seen mine then mr Viv lol :-) hugs Jan xx
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