My Feelings

This morning I realized how I really feel inside You make my heart skipa beat My mind is racing and still my stomache fladders My heart is whole with you in my life If you was to leave me My heart would just die My spirit would be shadder My soul would be lost This is my feeling my feeling for you after all.

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/2/2015 11:21:00 PM

Congrats Lisa for a big win with this very beautiful write!

Lisa Grems
Date: 11/29/2015 9:55:00 AM

thank you. i didnt even know i won

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/2/2015 2:50:00 PM

Lisa, Congratulations on your win. I'm overwhelmed on the outcome of my collaborations, I also gave a fair mention to those who did not follow the rules. Stop by my latest blog "MY FELLINGS" or my newest poem "FLESH" if you'd like or have time. Enjoy some of the collaborations on my list. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Lisa Grems
Date: 11/29/2015 9:55:00 AM

thank you

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/20/2015 7:13:00 PM

Hi Lisa, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 8/20/2015 6:25:00 PM

Lisa, this is deep, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT