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My Favorite Devonshire

Will You =====000===== Will You? Will you walk with me? I’m not looking for marriage Past loves left me so lonely This pain – I come with baggage Will you talk to me? For you erase my sadness Your counsel helps so much, you see Without you, I fall to madness Will you accept me? Trust issues I tote along I have fears of what’s to be But I vow I’ll not do you wrong By:Carolyn Devonshire ================000=============== Carloyn Devonshire.One of the brightest stars of this site.A poet with a big heart. And she bares it in her poetry.Very few poets do so.I remember when I joined this site she always used to encourage me with her inspiring words.That time I felt my poetry pages were incomplete without her comments.She is one of those who helped me to grow as a poet.In reply to her questions in the above poem,I would say-- YES CAROLYN, I WILL!!!

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Date: 6/12/2012 1:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your super win in Gwen's contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/11/2012 10:00:00 AM
Dear Kash, when you say you "Will," I believe it. I just wish I had more time to read poetry now, but you are an inspiration to many and your writing style is fabulous. Congrats on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/11/2012 2:07:00 AM
Kash, congrats on your win..David
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Date: 6/10/2012 2:59:00 PM
Thanks again, Kashi! It means the world to Carolyn--I am sure of it! :) Gwendolen
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Date: 5/27/2012 1:14:00 PM
You chose another one of my favorites of Carolyn's, Kash. It really spoke to the deepest part of my heart...the part that wants someone to love me, just for me, not what I aspire to be down the road. I know she was touched to read your narrative. It is a meaningful one! Thanks for participating in this tribute to our dear friend! Always your friend, Gwendolen
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Date: 5/25/2012 11:27:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words, Kash. Although my illness prevents me from commenting as much as I'd like, I'm still reading your poems and have seen remarkable growth in your writing. Your talent comes from within and continues to evolve. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/25/2012 5:29:00 AM
heartfelt dedication and good choice of poetry from carolyn, kashi... where are you??..:) huggs!
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Date: 5/24/2012 8:10:00 PM
Good luck In the contest Kash..enjoyed stopping by tonight~ take care :-) PD
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Date: 5/24/2012 4:34:00 PM
You chose a wonderful one to showcase, Kashinath!! Sweet words expressed about her too.
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Date: 5/24/2012 4:08:00 PM
This is one of my favorite poems of hers, if not my all time favorite! She is the kindest most generous, respectful, and loving person I've met on this site, if not ever in my life! You have chosen well with your selection! Great Choice!!
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Date: 5/24/2012 3:28:00 PM
Kash, another great poem of Carolyn's, like your words as well..David
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Date: 5/24/2012 3:01:00 PM
Beautiful poem you chose Kash and lovely words from you to Carolyn. - Wish you luck in contest. - oxox hug Anne-Lise
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