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My Favorite Bar By Far

My Favorite Bar by Far On Josh by gosh I had set my eyes Waiting for anything that should surprise Me like the good taste of a great beer That down my throat likes to disappear. Had to check six versions of poem I wrote Then put on hat and grabbed my coat Into my mighty plane started to climb Which was neat and pretty with no grime. Plane was shiny like beer brewing tank That on both could trust and always bank From up in air made a marvelous view Below Check Six appeared that is true. Runway was now all clear for landing And my taste for beer kept demanding Me to return to Check Six again and again My favorite bar where I have often been. James Thomas Horn Retired Veteran and Poet

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Date: 8/14/2015 12:02:00 PM
Thanks... The search is on. :D
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Date: 8/14/2015 11:31:00 AM
James - You're welcome. The poem sings with ingenuity. x Did you ever see River Greene's friend's questionku, "Greene with envy"? My, it was good, and I meant to FAVE it. I can't now as both River Greene and friend have left. I'll try and discover the man's name, a play on words.
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Date: 8/14/2015 11:49:00 AM
Did you ever see River. This is all that came out. Wonder what happened to the rest. I remember River Phoenix. Mine also cut off so I had to hit return so it would drop down and I could read it. Having fun is always fun. Jim Horn
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Date: 8/14/2015 11:39:00 AM
https://www.bing.com/search?q=River%20Greene's%2C%20%22Green%20with%20envy.%22&form=WNSGPH&qs=SW&cvid=e1291fea45d24e889dd942db8bb1aa39&pq=River%20Greene's%2C%20%22Green%20with%20envy.%22&sbts=1439570215053&nclid=IjUQ%2BCd7FJdgOr64uSruPQ%3D%3D&ts=1439570228226 This is really interesting River Green and Green with envy. Jim Horn
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Date: 8/14/2015 11:36:00 AM
It had been buried I did discover So poem will have to uncover. Jim Horn
Date: 8/14/2015 12:47:00 AM
:D Unexpected and fun. I have given it a 7 and marked it as a FAVE.
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Date: 8/14/2015 11:21:00 AM
Not only awesome your comment has been, Hope to receive another like that again. Jim Horn

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