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Once a week I take a long walk from my home. To the land of the dead and lay flowers on top of your stone. For hours and hours I stay and I pray. Telling you I miss you and ill see you again someday. As I wipe these tears from my eyes I cant help but hate myself for being the reason you died. You were my everything you were my world. The love of my life, my baby girl. I didn't see it coming it happened so fast one second were driving and all of a sudden crash. Before we departed you looked at me and laughed. You said good buy that you loved me then you started to gasp. When the police finally got there I knew I was done. Just another sad story of a teen who was drunk. The thoughts of that night are forever in my head. Making me wish that I too was dead. So the point here that I am trying to make. when you drink and drive its not always just your life you can take.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/30/2014 7:25:00 PM
Drew,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy being part of the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "In The Moment" in hopes it inspires you to write again. I look forward in following you and your poetry:) Enjoy this site, and the coming New Year! From: your new poet friend@-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/29/2014 1:22:00 PM
- A warm welcome to the P- Soup, Drew - The year 2014 is almost over ... and I look forward to reading new poems from you in the new year 2015 - Happy New Year! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/29/2014 5:48:00 AM
A very honest and sad, but true read here Phillip, thanks for sharing. Good Job....Sharon G.
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