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My Fathers World

Sunk comfortably aloof in his mauve reading chair Dad's evening reverie; pipe, cheese, crackers and book His world vanished in smoke swirling into the air For his family; an occasional vacant look Yet he'd take time to spin me a bedtime story Of enchanted lands and daring schemes Flights of fancy depicting heroic glory Betraying his real life's unmet dreams My dad's inner home, the one he preferred Was far from our world's cruel, petty strife His family and solace was the written word Though he was good to his kids and true to his wife This world was too much with him somehow A scathingly mean-spirited bother But I just remember his soft kindness now Blessed to have had such a father

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Date: 7/8/2023 8:50:00 PM
The outer man vs. the inner man. You were fortunate to have met the inner man, your true father. Always wish I had. Peace, Gershon
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Date: 6/19/2023 3:49:00 PM
A wonderful tribute to your Dad’s memory. I enjoyed the read. SuZ
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 6/19/2023 7:32:00 PM
Thank you SuZ. Memories of my father tends to become richer with every passing year. Hope your fathers day was pleasant.
Date: 6/18/2023 11:29:00 PM
Robert a fine tribute to your Dad. No matter how strong and masculine, when there is a gentle side, it tends to be remembered most. Your Father sounds like one to be very proud of, and your poem speaks volumes that you are. Well done,
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 6/19/2023 7:34:00 PM
I find that my father was a much finer individual as time passes, and am able to ponder more on my experiences with. Thank you, for your frequent visits and thoughtful remarks.
Date: 6/18/2023 7:32:00 PM
You shared an intimate look inside, of your inner most feelings of your father with us. Thank you, Robert. I will cherish and favorite it! :) Happy Fathers Day!
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 6/19/2023 7:36:00 PM
Thank you for the fave, it's a kind gesture and much appreciated!!
Date: 6/18/2023 5:39:00 PM
Robert your truth speaks from your Heart. Your father sounds like a dad who loved his children and his wife. It brings me pleasure to know you had such a dad... I wish you a Happy Fathers Day today and thank you for sharing how special your dad is and will ever be. God bless you...
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 6/19/2023 7:38:00 PM
Fatherhood is a difficult proposition, that one should be thankful for a job done-well. Thank you and hope yours went well! Blessings to you, Michael

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