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My Fathers Killer

As i looked into the eyes of the man who killed my father, who didn't care that he had a daughter ,but could care less about a lady in distress, when my mom found out she could barely lay her head to rest, yeah he could never clean up his own dirty mess, he hit and ran, and didn't have the heart to stand , just didn’t even give the body a chance, so i watched picking him up with my bleeding hand, he didn't even fight with his fist like a real man.

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Skat A

Date: 2/15/2015 9:46:00 AM

Monica :) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. Hope you had a wonderful Valentines day. ~SKAT LOVE~

Malik Johnson

Date: 2/10/2015 8:54:00 AM

Very beautiful and deep. I was moved by this, thank you.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/26/2015 12:53:00 PM

- A warm welcome to the P Soup, Monica :) - Hope it will come many more poems from you in the future - Enjoy reading your first, a very well written poem - // Anne-Lise :)

Monica Bradley
Date: 1/27/2015 4:02:00 PM

THANK YOU VERY MUCH ANNE LISE

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/25/2015 1:04:00 AM

Monica, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 1/24/2015 6:08:00 AM

Monica,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Monica Bradley
Date: 1/27/2015 4:08:00 PM

WELL THANK IM VERY TALENTED SINGIN, DRAWING AND DANCING BUT MY NUMBER ONE FAVORITE IS POETRY AMD VERY GLAD IM NOT THE ONLY WHO LOVES POETRY

Veronica Bradley

Date: 1/23/2015 4:42:00 PM

Monica Bradley
Date: 1/27/2015 4:08:00 PM

THANKS V