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My Father Is Not What He Used To Be

My octogenarian father can no more walk the mile His memory lurks behind his perpetual deceptive smile He has hidden us in a chasm so deep and cavernous, where no light ever does peep A wise gentleman once, now is a hapless child Easily pleased,angered,intimidated or beguiled He looks at old family albums like a kaleidoscope Amused by colors sans any warmth, cognizance or hope. He is elated when I sometimes go over ‘ABCs’ And the accuracy and irony of his words oft lacerates me. "K is for knowledge", he stealthily whispers "Never to amass, make sure always to disperse!" "D is for daughter, but friend who are you? Please stay for dinner, won’t you!” Written on 05/19/2016 for Brenda Chiri-Carroll's contest "A Father is"

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Date: 6/3/2016 7:15:00 AM
Congrats Sara, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 5/28/2016 10:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your win,Sara.
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Date: 5/28/2016 7:30:00 PM
Much sadness here along with the love. Congratulations on your poem and win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/28/2016 2:33:00 PM
Great rhymes and win.. Linda
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Date: 5/28/2016 9:50:00 AM
Sara, it is never pleasant to watch someone slip away......before they slip away. Congrats on your placement in the contest
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Date: 5/20/2016 12:53:00 PM
ohh, i am deeply saddened by this delicate write... so well conveyed with defined images, sara.. huggs
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 5/20/2016 2:29:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by Nette!
Date: 5/19/2016 8:45:00 PM
oh my, that last part. I know how you feel. My stepdad became this way. VERY sincere and heartfelt. I LOVE this one. SEVEN
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 5/20/2016 2:29:00 PM
Thanks Andrea appreciate your comments.

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