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My Father In Me

************************************************************************************ Twas hard to remember exactly the last shooting star which I have seen Thus I seized the moment to make a wish upon a dream; asking for the only gift That truly matters unto me; for amid all these things beautiful, love is the key ~ ************************************************************************************ ....“Upon A Falling Star” *

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Diane Christian

Date: 2/13/2012 5:00:00 PM

Hi how are you hun? I was just thinking of you, and I got a comment of Kash poet asking after you, but i keep out of situations they were asking for unblock and said it was blocked accidentialy but i am here for you John, I hope you are ok and wel, my new Job is going great thank the lord for that, I loveworking with people and it is perfect and fits around my 2 tenagers LOL god is working so much in my life and i am thriled, but I am thrilled to know friends as ebautful as you xx take care God bless you always and keep you xxxx all mt Love from diane now and always xxx

Maxeen Dennis

Date: 2/5/2012 6:57:00 PM

I agree John, love is the key!

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/28/2012 12:01:00 PM

Yes, I agree that love is the key to open the heart to enter into the soul, lovely worded, bl

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/24/2012 7:30:00 AM

awesome poem John. Poignant and just right on. I saw your comment you made on Doris Culverhouses's poem about the aquarium and it got me laughing pretty hard. Guess it brought back old memories. Thanks for that laugh and for sharing this fine poem - Bob

Diane Christian

Date: 1/19/2012 4:05:00 AM

aww lovley, thank you John, you are so precious to me , and thanks for your kind comments and lifting my spirits high through your wonderful wisdom and words of encouragement, you are ablessing unto me and are a dear friend, God bless you Love diane x

Lucinda Cayton

Date: 1/18/2012 1:31:00 PM

an angel got her wings.... :) love conquers death itself at times. Very nice. Hope you are doing well. I believe it or not understand, glad your not here. take GOOD Care, and God Bless you, Cindy

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/14/2012 1:50:00 PM

Wonderful, amazing, interesting....... all words for 'Love is the key'. Thanks for your comment on my write. bl

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/30/2011 2:10:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this piece today John..)

Dalila Agtani

Date: 12/28/2011 10:13:00 PM

John "Love is the key" I agree with this line. It is an intangible , precious, everlasting gift one can receive. Thanks for sharing. Dalila

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/27/2011 11:32:00 PM

Aww, John. This is short and sweet! I wish the very best for you, always, my friend!. : ) May this coming year be one filled with all the good things you want for yourself. And I hope Santa was good to you. Thanks for reading my poems. Much love, Annalise

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/3/2011 6:33:00 PM

: ) Yes, it needs repeating, "...love is the key. If only we all had eyes to see! Beautiful thoughts and I'm sure He smiled whilst watching you. I find him there in the simplest of pleasures..the soft rain, the early a.m. fog... Keep wishing and hoping, John. It keeps us alive. Much love, Annalise

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 11/23/2011 12:33:00 PM

It sure is, and the only way to create, recover and recreate. Just as God has done over so many eons of years. How little do we realized how much we are loved by the One who gave us life. Thanks for sharing, John and thank you for your comments on my poem. Caroline.

John Loving Iii

Date: 11/23/2011 3:56:00 AM

as all three John's would agree. john

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 11/17/2011 8:29:00 PM

A beauty that gives the Father recognition He deserves. Such a special tribute.

John Loving Iii
Date: 11/23/2011 3:57:00 AM

she got it.

Shannon Deane

Date: 11/17/2011 8:00:00 PM

I love this piece...the words flow beautifully...am glad to have stopped by and stumble on this gem...fab...luv shannon