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My Farewell on the Sinking Titanic

I’m literally on a sinking ship. Terror I see, hear, and feel all around. I thought this would be a really safe trip. My thinking clearly was not all that sound. The band’s playing “Nearer My God to Thee.” Who knew that musicians could be so brave? Their words will become my actuality. My prayer is that God will come and save all us poor souls here. Oh, how I do dread knowing my loved ones I’ll not see again and the ocean soon will be my deathbed. In this bottle find all my last words. Then give my family this final sonnet. All my love and thanks are written on it.

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Date: 1/16/2024 5:21:00 PM
Sweetly sad sonnet Andrea. Thx for participating :)
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Date: 1/15/2024 9:10:00 AM
I’m always amazed at how the musicians kept playing. So selfless. I enjoyed your Sonnet. All the best in the contest. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 1/12/2024 1:32:00 PM
A fitting tribute...
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Date: 1/10/2024 4:53:00 PM
wonderful and touching metaphor andrea, there are always survivors, i know that, waht an inspiring poem, will think again of it yann
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/10/2024 6:03:00 PM
Thanks, Yann
Date: 1/10/2024 11:12:00 AM
I could feel the fear in your sonnet.. an interesting form you have used for this prompt... I know Tommy likes a good sonnet..
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/10/2024 6:02:00 PM
Oh does he? Sure hope he likes this one
Date: 1/10/2024 5:52:00 AM
Heart wrenching! Your heart in a bottle!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/10/2024 6:04:00 PM
Thanks, Kim
Date: 1/10/2024 4:53:00 AM
Ah you’ve written an excellent sonnet for this prompt. I enjoyed reading it and felt it. How soul hitting it is. Like I’ve said im always traveling, and mostly boat rides too, and the sea sometimes get so rough that i cant help but pray throughout the journey. And i think words are powerful, just like thoughts, they become things, so im a bit hesitant to write on this prompt. I hope you’ll score high. Best wishes for the contest
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/10/2024 6:04:00 PM
Thanks. I am sure you will come up with something too.
Date: 1/10/2024 2:06:00 AM
Brilliant. The Titanic punished itself with hasty words. Hugs.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/10/2024 6:04:00 PM
Yep they sure did
Date: 1/10/2024 12:06:00 AM
An excellent sonnet as always my dear poet friend Andrea. In fact, you are the first poet who inspired me to write sonnets. I've fallen in love with sonnet since I've read your many outstanding masterpieces. You've chosen the beautiful form for the prompt my dearest friend and I'm loving it so much again. It reminds me of the movie where I admired the bravery and strong faith of the band players. You expressed your emotions so well. Thanks for sharing. God bless you always . Hugs
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/10/2024 6:10:00 PM
Wow. Thanks for your kind words. I am glad to have inspired you to love sonnets. Yes. The part of the movie where you see the band playing. It is so sad.
Date: 1/9/2024 6:55:00 PM
Funny....we use the Titanic as a metaphor today for many things. At a large meeting my boss said to me (when I was making a suggestion that I feel very strongly about), "That ship has already sailed." So, I said....Well that ship could be the Titanic. When I was recently in Northern Ireland, I visited the Titanic Museum in Belfast. I have a pen that has a ship that sinks as a souvenir. I have to go play with it now (lol)!!! Your poem is wonderful as usual. Sad to be among the sinking it is.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/10/2024 6:13:00 PM
Hmm is it the pen I was using while sinking on the Titanic? Haha
Date: 1/9/2024 4:07:00 PM
a great entry for the contest, Andrea. I appreciate the narrative nature of your Sonnet. Best of luck with the contest, hugs, Sara
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/10/2024 6:13:00 PM
Thanks, dear

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