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My Fantasy 1

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My Fantasy 1

Her name for now, I wish to conceal
And when I make my case i will reveal
Well then, I hope we have a deal

Combing the streets of the suburb, I've always thought ideal
Mostly, it helps my shattered and dejected heart to heal
Once in a while I come across this seal.....
Pardon me... I know i don't sound real

No seal will comb the streets hoping to find a meal
More importantly a seal in the streets sound surreal
But I'm only likening her beauty to that of a seal
And if its ever possible, her beauty I would wish to steal.....

To be Continued........

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  1. Date: 12/1/2010 6:48:00 PM
    Well done felix... Can't wait to hear more aboout this beautiful "seal"... Lay

  1. Date: 12/1/2010 3:47:00 PM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope your time on the Soup will be fun and filled with sharing.. check out the contests too.. good luck with luv..