My Family

year nineteen sixty killed in language disturbance my lovely father he left five offspring my two sisters three brothers along with mother uncle looked after he was of mixed character sweet sour both given my eldest brother more than a politician tries to unrest me all have families good with two sisters only two sons God's given one's sound engineer very new in Music's field resides at Mumbai other's Ll.M just passed ready for practice now He is with me my lovely house wife cooks food and enjoys T.V i write poetry For Haiku on "My family" Contest: Sponsored by: marvin celestia

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Dineen Williams Gault

Date: 5/8/2016 6:16:00 AM

Sorry about your dad. It was a blessing that your uncle stepped in. A lovely family you have, that's a blessing as well.

Bl Devnath
Date: 5/8/2016 7:20:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your comment. Loved always, bl

Constance La France

Date: 5/2/2016 3:59:00 PM

BL, I also loved the lovely house wife, it made me laugh that she watches TV, exactly what any good house wife should do ! a sweet 7 ~

Bl Devnath
Date: 5/2/2016 5:07:00 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment and for your appreciation with 7. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/2/2016 3:34:00 PM

my favorite part was last verse where you tell about YOU and your wife. She is a woman after my own heart. I too love cooking, watching tv, AND writing poetry.

Bl Devnath
Date: 5/2/2016 5:04:00 PM

Smile always my lovely friend. Thanks for your beautiful comment with much appreciation. Loved always, bl

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 5/2/2016 12:37:00 PM

BL, a fine write mt friend. I was also born in 1960. My family was dysfunctional ! I am now happily married :-) and my wife is a great cook.

Bl Devnath
Date: 5/2/2016 12:49:00 PM

My lovely friend, perhaps we are of the same track. Thanks for your comment. Loved always, bl

Lukas Ficklin

Date: 5/1/2016 1:44:00 PM

Sounds lovely at your house, bl. After all, you deserve it!! This one is sure to stand out.

Bl Devnath
Date: 5/1/2016 1:53:00 PM

Thanks for your beautiful comment with a great wish my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/1/2016 1:40:00 PM

- Enjoy your delicious food ....... in the meanwhile I enjoy your lovely poem, dear friend Bl - Good luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath
Date: 5/1/2016 1:52:00 PM

Ha ha ha... enjoy. i am enjoying your delicious heartfelt comment too. Thanks for your wishes my lovely friend. Loved always, bl