My Family

My Family I love my family from the core of my heart From a far off distance and miles apart Being a daughter is the best feeling A family which is very understanding I love my family My dad,who is a superhero My mom,who is above all My sister,sweet loving and caring My brother,who will be fighting but with lot of love and care My grandfather,who gifted me on my first birthday a cute bear My grandmother,who took care of me when I was sick My aunt,who was there with me through out my thin and thick I love my family,I love my family

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Skat A

Date: 11/24/2015 3:35:00 PM

Hi Mansi, I stopped by to read a few more poems from you today, Hope you stop by my poems soon. Enjoy yourself on this awesome site. Have yourself a wonderful Thanksgiving Holiday. Forever **SKAT**

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 11/20/2015 11:44:00 PM

Hi Mansi, this is such an excellent first posting! What a beautiful tribute to your family! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/20/2015 3:02:00 AM

Mansi WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 11/19/2015 5:43:00 PM

Mansi,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT