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My Fairy Tale

You are my shadow in my weakest days Giving me light in my darkness way Sheltering me from harmful pains Thereby listening to my untold story Through this optical lines we communicate Distance never appeared as an obstacle Witnessing our secrets talks Mediating two souls to be one Behind those words and advises Like chocolate kisses so tender and sweet You lighten my burden spirit Took away my fears Friend as we often called each other I could never imagine it could be more than this Being there could be more for me… To have your Love isn’t great enough? Once a upon time there was a friend called “YOU” Now my fairy tales of Love do come true…. Wish upon a star forever “Me and You” And we shall live happily ever after…. @lemp3082008

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Date: 3/21/2016 10:30:00 PM
Lena, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 7/23/2017 1:45:00 PM
Thank you like how I enjoyed your writings too God bless.
Date: 1/15/2016 7:41:00 PM
LENA, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **
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Date: 7/23/2017 1:43:00 PM
Nice hearing from you SKAT. GOD BLESS.
Date: 8/1/2014 7:07:00 PM
To know someone as a friend first is to know a strong relationship. Well written.
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Date: 7/23/2017 1:43:00 PM
Thank you. God bless.
Date: 6/5/2014 4:38:00 AM
What a lovely poem... when a dear friend becomes so much more, it's a powerful thing. Thanks for sharing!
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Date: 7/23/2017 1:39:00 PM
Yes, thank you when you expect the least and it becomes more it was wonderful. God bless.
Date: 6/4/2014 12:40:00 PM
Nicely done, Lena. A nice poem with a worthy sentiment. Hugs and blessings...mel :)
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Date: 7/23/2017 1:38:00 PM
Thank you. God bless.
Date: 6/3/2014 8:02:00 AM
Great poem, Lena...friendship is the best foundation for lasting love. Glad you decided to come back to Poetrysoup.
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Date: 6/3/2014 9:49:00 AM
Thank you so much... Faye. Yeah, I'm glad I decided too.
Date: 5/28/2014 1:11:00 AM
Wow Lena, this super sweet friendship grown to love, I can feel the appreciationn in your words. I know this feeling too. The last verse is perfect, and I'm intrigued by the question, "to have your love isn't great enough?..." a lovely poem.J.A.B.
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Date: 5/29/2014 2:26:00 AM
Thank you so much for a sweet and kind comments Justin.
Date: 5/27/2014 10:43:00 AM
I especially loved the Happily Ever After ending. Beautiful read... Glad you came back to PoetrySoup again.
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Date: 5/27/2014 10:59:00 PM
I'm glad you love it, thanks for this warmth comment. It's been a long time that I have been pass through here, I'm back now.
Date: 5/23/2014 4:35:00 PM
Dear Lena, I have always believed that true love often emerges from a solid foundation of friendship. I hope this is the case for you and that your love endures. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 5/25/2014 9:02:00 AM
I do agree with you...thanks.
Date: 5/23/2014 12:14:00 PM
Inside us we all have that wanting 'Fairy Tale' and many of us do achieve. Nice poem Lena :)
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Date: 5/25/2014 9:03:00 AM
yeah, we do and what we only need is the right time when it will happen. Thanks James.
Date: 5/23/2014 10:23:00 AM
Hi Lena, Nice to meet you. I adore this poem:~) Truly truly beautiful. WOW~ Thank you so much for sharing this GEM with us here. Love and Peace, Deborah
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Date: 5/25/2014 9:04:00 AM
I'm very please to meet you to Deborah. Thank you the warmth comment.
Date: 5/22/2014 8:00:00 AM
This is sweet, I too got my fairy tale when I met my sweetie 21 years ago.
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Date: 5/23/2014 12:33:00 AM
I'm glad that you found your own sweet fairy tales. Thanks.
Date: 5/22/2014 5:41:00 AM
Poems of distance and wanting touch my heart... I am touched by what your soul speaks... PR
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Date: 5/23/2014 12:33:00 AM
love touches one soul. Thanks.
Date: 5/22/2014 4:56:00 AM
a nice poem, i love fairy tales and love this poem of love. thanks for your kind comments on my poens
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Date: 5/23/2014 12:34:00 AM
your welcome, thanks you the same.

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