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My Eyes

Emission of light rays from the core of my being,shows true traits,treasures, fear;lust and love staring at nature`s good works. Without them I can`t behold, pretty legs, pleasant faces and attacks by wicked ones, which have made me myopic. CONTEST:"Special crown of my body-A whitney" sponsored by Nette Onclaud. 6-16-2012.

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Date: 7/8/2012 8:35:00 PM
Olusegun, this is a very nice and sweet win for Nette's contest.. xox~PD
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Date: 6/29/2012 6:43:00 PM
Olusegun, congrats on your super win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 6/29/2012 2:22:00 AM
Olusegun congrats on your win...David
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Date: 6/28/2012 2:19:00 PM
Wonderful job with your poem. congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/28/2012 1:25:00 PM
protection and pleasure...mmmh...both worthwhile functions no doubt. Congrats on your win Arowolo!
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Date: 6/28/2012 7:45:00 AM
Beautiful poem Olusegun!Congrats on your win!!
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Date: 6/27/2012 10:39:00 PM
myopic huh? , congrats on your win with this great entry
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Date: 6/27/2012 8:10:00 PM
You are right. Eyes are the windows of the soul they say and should top out as crowning jewel. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/27/2012 1:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the Nette's "Crown" contest Olusegun. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/24/2012 9:11:00 AM
well done. I like how you did your entry!
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Date: 6/20/2012 6:54:00 PM
Eyes, the windows to the soul, I wish you well in the contest with this exprressive poetry my friend. :)
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Date: 6/16/2012 4:34:00 PM
I like your verse..xox~pd
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Date: 6/15/2012 7:46:00 PM
This should make EVERYONE appreciate their eyes! Good luck in the contest, Olusequn <3
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