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My Eyes

My eyes they tell the truth, the story of my life Of both relentless selfishness and utter sacrifice My eyes they tell the story of both love and hate Of peaceful perfect bliss and wrenching heart ache My eyes they tell the story of a tender youth The bags that carry the weight of hurtful hidden truths My eyes they tell the story of both guilt and innocence Dimed by depression and livened by enlightenment My eyes they tell the story of both honesty and lies A roadmap leading to genuineness can be found within the lines My eyes they tell the story of the real me Revealing the true beauty of my authenticity My eyes they tell the story of both pain and happiness A tale of agony and a fairy tale of bliss My eyes they tell the story of my longing to be free They are the windows to my soul and they expose the inner me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/17/2012 10:38:00 PM
Bravo! Bravo! He shouts while clapping. Masterpiece of said!
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Date: 4/17/2012 10:39:00 PM
Please put a picture of your eyes up here?
Date: 3/10/2012 2:36:00 AM
Ur eyes.........hmmmmmmmm
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Date: 2/21/2012 4:48:00 AM
my eye sees u and i think i know you...lol. good work.thanks on ue comment on my poem
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Date: 2/10/2012 9:08:00 PM
great write!!! i have a fairy tale too.
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Date: 1/25/2012 8:12:00 AM
good pen.....good eyes...good heart...and good....?
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Date: 1/22/2012 2:26:00 AM
most profound write Chiquita. and the honesty is just simply... breathtaking.
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Date: 1/20/2012 8:16:00 PM
This is a deep well furnished write dear poet, and Many of us bare the burden of want,(freedom) ! You are not alone ! Have a wonderful weekend Chiquita....much love, james
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Date: 1/18/2012 1:07:00 AM
girl this was a wonderful read tonight. i loved it. i wish to read more like this one every night before bed. awesome write babe. keep it up, and i will comment more.
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Date: 1/14/2012 6:46:00 PM
Beautiful....thanks:)
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Date: 1/14/2012 1:48:00 PM
LOVELY poem,yes the eyes can teel.Happy eyes or sad eyes very true indeed. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/14/2012 12:57:00 PM
Fantastic and fabulous write Chiquita! The eyes are perfect windows to the soul and tell a lot of people...their hardships and troubles and of their happiness and joys! You described a lot of your life, which can be seen within your eyes, great poem! Awesome Work!!
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Date: 1/14/2012 12:34:00 PM
Smile ˜ This Is Beautiful & You Are Beautiful & Heaven Loves You * Beautiful Chiquita. ˜ Love, John!:) ˜
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Date: 1/14/2012 11:44:00 AM
Beautifully written and expressed piece. Well penned, best wishes Em :)
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Date: 1/14/2012 11:03:00 AM
Let me see those eyes:)A wonderful poem full of emotion.Anybody can relate to it.Enjoyed the read Chiquita.
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