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My Evening Salsa

The midday dazzle lays off by the maiden daytime A solstice ray parades over my eventide jollity The solitary hour bosomed by the bambini’s elfish prime An ecstatic hour greeted my heartfelt puerility The infrasonic twittery of birds melded by the sundown cosmic time A gentle breeze solemnly pass by my stargaze eternity. The daylight soulfully sonneted by the sunset bliss An allayed euphony coupled my awaited sapidity The blessed souls savored by the moonlit soul kiss A wishful rhyme pulsed my heart with chastity The shadow of fantasm abided by the solely muss A blended mind’s eye captured my evening salsa verity. ------------------------------x-------------------------------

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Date: 3/8/2010 10:28:00 PM
Congratulations, Swairik, for placing in the contest. Some interesting words and images in this one!
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Date: 3/8/2010 12:07:00 PM
Swarik, many congratulations on your win in Laura's fine contest with your wonderful poetry >> James
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Date: 3/8/2010 9:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Laura's Beyond Nightfall! contest Swairik. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/8/2010 3:19:00 AM
Brilliant wit, continue pouring us your poetic insight, Swairik. Congratulations to you. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 3/7/2010 7:13:00 PM
Congratulations Swairik, for your Honorable Mention in the Poetry Soup member contest: Beyond Nightfall! I can see why you did so well! Superb...the Salsa and chastity! Nice work! Smiles, Dane Ann
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