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My Eve

For I know what Adam went through From God, to me...Father, thank You First time he looked at Eve In Eden Rubbed his God given, overwhelmed eyes Saw her feet, legs, walking in bareness, her thighs Ravishing, her standing there, he couldn't believe And God gave him exactly and all that he would need An Impeccable Queen In the middle of the very first dream Woken from a deep sleep Missing a rib now, but she's here, Behold God's most paralyzing earthly creature! Ran his fingers through her hair Belly button & lips Shoulders & breasts, What delicious features The very first team, very first pair How Yahweh, all along, intended it to be....no fig leaves No eating from the forbidden tree Here Eve, kneel down with me Let's pray together and obey Blessed to have one another From the first time Adam held her hand Is she real Father? He must of asked.... Of course....yes my son...she's all yours....... Let me see, how she reacts..... His perfect opposite Kissed her face, shivering at first Then calm, natural and relaxed. Two beings, two rings, one flesh Here's a rose for you wife Eve Dinner's ready husband Adam, let's eat. Two become one, up before the sun Down with the moon, procreating Seven times a week, intense In the beginning.......it did not add up But now...................it all makes wonderful sense. God willed us, from above And so it was

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Date: 8/17/2016 9:08:00 AM
Well done Gregory, this is a good read - DC
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Gregory Abella
Date: 8/17/2016 1:12:00 PM
Thank you, thank you, thank you....
Date: 8/11/2016 7:02:00 PM
Well expressed, Gregory... your thoughts are epic.... Linda
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Gregory Abella
Date: 8/11/2016 7:54:00 PM
Thank you Linda
Date: 8/11/2016 6:00:00 PM
Gregory, , Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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Gregory Abella
Date: 8/11/2016 6:18:00 PM
I accept. Thank you Skat

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