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My Enemy

I cannot explain All the grief and sorrow I feel about you You used to be my friend But now you come towards me As my enemy I said one thing And now You hate me Giving me The cold shoulder You were all I had left You were my only friend And now I lost you I don’t know what to do You have other friends I don’t Every time I see you My heart Just becomes A cold stone I feel nothing When I see you Except pure hatred And anger So my old friend You are now My enemy

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John Patrick Robbins Aka Gonzo

Date: 11/22/2009 6:00:00 PM

Strong words and solid writting. just really like this write you write with great emotion

Donna Golden

Date: 11/21/2009 12:18:00 PM

I've been in this place, Allison. However, we made up after a year or so, then our friendship was stronger than ever. What it took was humbling myself and asking forgiveness, as well as giving her forgiveness in return. Don't give up hope! Hugs, Donna

Eleanore Bourner

Date: 11/20/2009 5:16:00 PM

it's so sad how a great friend suddenly turns away, thishas happened to me as well. but you aren't alone. ever. there's always someone there even when a good friend betrays you. keep going :) ------Ell

Anthony Nutter

Date: 11/20/2009 3:20:00 AM

I sense a feeling of betrayal being expressed in this write. Well done and from the heart I believe. As the saying goes "keep your friends close and your enemies closer."

P P

Date: 11/20/2009 1:37:00 AM

imaginary enemies ?