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My End Is Now

When I was growing up, Daily they packed my outgrown: Shoes, shirts,suits and trousers; And paid me commendation As they milled around me Like night ants around light! When I was geisha-guy And my frame was fame And my gaiety was deity Oh they milled around me Like day ants around rose When worker I was And my table was the host To all that delighted belly Oh they rounded me about Applauded me with their belch After my grain and grape. Now my hairs are white And my frame is gone My teeth have left Sight is dim, hearing is poor; How quick they dessert me Like a cinema after the show. It is home alone As they call me demented The brats that once me hailed No one to tell goodbye Sad today I must go My end is now.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/26/2015 1:48:00 AM
nice piece..."my hairs are white"...struck a personal chord!
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Date: 11/24/2014 9:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your 2nd place win for your sad but lovely poem. It is so beautiful expressed. Sandra
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Date: 11/22/2014 9:35:00 AM
Congratulations, this is so cool!
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 11/22/2014 11:53:00 AM
A delightful greeting,thank you very much Richard.
Date: 11/21/2014 9:30:00 PM
I just saw this the other day and am here to congratulate you on the superb win. it is not just lonely, but very sad.
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Date: 11/21/2014 8:14:00 PM
Oh, this is so sad Kayod5. We still applaud you for your great poetry.
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Date: 11/21/2014 5:40:00 PM
This is remarkable KAYOD5. Another truly inspiring verse I will Fave too. Congratulations on a masterful write
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Date: 11/21/2014 11:16:00 AM
heart wrenching Kayod congrats on win
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Date: 11/21/2014 9:58:00 AM
This is brilliant, I will add it to my favs. Congratulations on your well deserved win.
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 11/21/2014 10:40:00 AM
Thank you Maurice,you have always been there for me...huggs
Date: 11/21/2014 7:27:00 AM
Sadful expressions Kayod5 beautifully expressed! Congrats on awesome win!
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 11/21/2014 8:00:00 AM
Thank you Ma;nice to have your here.
Date: 11/21/2014 4:23:00 AM
oh such a sad sad write - I can relate to this so much with my family circumstances - a great pen kayod5 many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 11/21/2014 7:58:00 AM
Thank you Jan...huggs
Date: 11/19/2014 8:53:00 AM
What a poem! So riveting from start to finish...Oh, why does it have to be this way? Why? I'm so moved by your write....No, the end is not now. You are here to write and bring cheer to others and to get the glory you deserve. Hugs to you...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/19/2014 9:25:00 AM
I'm so so glad to hear this, my dear. Bless you for keeping in touch with her. I'll send her a note as well. I've been so wrapped up in my problems. Thank you.
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 11/19/2014 9:13:00 AM
Nice to read from you Eileen and I am happy you share my poetic feeling. Next: Donna penned me today,she promised to be here soon...huggs
Date: 11/18/2014 11:33:00 PM
Your end may be now, but your poetry will live on and in that way so will you! I loved this journey though your life! Excellent!
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Date: 11/18/2014 11:03:00 PM
I appreciate all your comments recently. Unfortunately I can't seem to keep up with comments this week. Wish I could see more of your stuff. But I only have time to return half my comments tonight. When I have more time, I want to read more of your poems.
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Date: 11/18/2014 11:02:00 PM
oh yes, that is life. So sad . I have seen old folks in the rest homes with nobody coming to love and pay attention them anymore. When even family is not there for you, that is the saddest of all. This poem really captures that feeling. Good poem
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Date: 11/18/2014 10:57:00 PM
Dear Kayode: So much of what you write is true. Enjoyed this poetic journey with you my friend. Leon
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