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My Empty Shoes

Shoes going nowhere... Ashes used to fertilize Blood thirsty hunger T 'was time for shower Water turned to gas and smoke Shoes going nowhere... for Abe's contest:" Leather Voices" (AUSHWITZ)

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/18/2010 12:56:00 PM

I think you did a geat job with this little gem, Iolanda. Best of luck in the contest. I am sure hoping to get to all my comments today. It's good to get back into the "groove" of things, but it takes work!! Luv, andrea

Joe Flach

Date: 5/13/2010 9:00:00 PM

This contest really is a parodox - lovely words for a terrible event. Yet words set to prose sometimes help to heal historical wounds. You did a GREAT job on this. Regardless how it fairs in the contest, this is well done. Joe

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/13/2010 8:46:00 PM

Good luck in the contest

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/13/2010 7:31:00 PM

nice write, enjoyed and good luck on the contest