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My Empty Heart

My mind….is this real My thoughts….stray to you In my dreams….always the same Awakening….body still aware Senses….only wanting Touching….can it be Feeling….body alive Realisation….still alone Why did you leave…My Empty Heart My Empty Heart

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Angie Thomas

Date: 11/4/2015 11:56:00 AM

awwww.... quite touching... <3 <3

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/5/2015 11:13:00 PM

David, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Have yourself a Happy Easter Love LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/20/2014 4:07:00 PM

David, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy being part of the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "WINTER POEMS" in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I look forward in following you and your poetry:) Enjoy the Christmas Holidays! From: your new poet friend@-> LINDA <-@

David Mcsorley
Date: 12/21/2014 3:30:00 PM

It's ok Linda I found out what to do and have submitted one. Thanks for the invite Dave xx

David Mcsorley
Date: 12/21/2014 3:27:00 PM

Hi Linda thanks for the welcome. How do I enter a poem in your contest