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My Dying Eyes

Seasons have weathered and withered Our love all but wilted away But long I shall stay beside you By this stone, here by your grave The gates that I passed, wrought iron The path stretched narrow though Many, the distance, passed by To be here now, here by you. I sat with the blackest of raven He says said he carried you yon He tells of your travels further On your grave, right here upon Long I would sit and shall listen Long he would lend my year Here I would sit beside you And I'd shed one single teardrop. Long I shall sit till I wither Till I all but weather away By the hand curved headstone maker Right here beside your grave Decay it shall feast upon me Till I descend back to the dust. A firm grasp to the ghost of the once was I shall do now what I must, The thoughts I shall hold the dearest Those memories I'll grasp true Long I shall sit and then after Right here by, right by you. I long for that thing that I treasured Yet nevermore will that thing now exist Eternally here I'll be waiting For the one that once death kissed Tending these feelings trusted I travel towards total demise With this stone I shall sit beside you And I shall dry my dying eyes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/10/2015 10:15:00 PM
Alexander, Congratulations on having your poem featured on Poetry Soup's Home Page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Alexander Kehl
Date: 1/24/2015 9:06:00 AM
Thanks so much Linda. I was out for a couple of days. So sorry for the late reply. Again thanks very much for your worm words. I feel really humble.
Date: 1/1/2015 4:40:00 PM
Alexander, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy being part of the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "In The Moment" in hopes it inspires you to write again. I look forward in following you and your poetry:) Enjoy this site, and the coming New Year! From: your new poet friend@-> LINDA <-@
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Alexander Kehl
Date: 1/2/2015 12:18:00 PM
Thanks. I am glad to be your friend.
Date: 1/1/2015 1:11:00 PM
- Warm welcome P- Soup, Alexander .... first day of the new year 2015! - A moving and great written poem from you - I wish you Happy New Year !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Alexander Kehl
Date: 1/2/2015 12:19:00 PM
Thanks. A Late Happy New Year :)
Date: 1/1/2015 1:07:00 PM
An excellent effort, Alexander! With a little bit of editing (perhaps the substituting of the odd word here and there) it would be a great poem! Do not be afraid to "Tweak" that is what it is all about. Good luck; and welcome! :) john.
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Alexander Kehl
Date: 1/2/2015 12:19:00 PM
Thanks John. I will try my best

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