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My Dreams

I will be who I want to be You can joke around about me And say my dreams are all crazy And tell me you hate What I love And you tell me I should hate it too And then you laugh Like you just told the funniest joke Ever. And you think it doesn’t hurt me When you say that But it really screws me up inside Sometimes I think I should hate myself And sometimes I just want to die Because you make it seem Like I will NEVER reach my dreams, No matter how far I reach.

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Noel Tonka

Date: 4/12/2016 4:05:00 PM

Nicely written.

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Date: 3/31/2016 5:12:00 PM

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