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My Dream Vacation

The silver bird took us off, we could fly up in the big blue sky. When we landed water was near, a huge ship was waiting for our arrival. Oh to be wined~dinned and pampered, by day and by night. Each new port was a thrill, adventure and shopping was magical. The week is now over, with tears we now leave for home. Date Written:3/5/2022 MY DREAM VACATION Poetry Contest Sponsored by: L MILTON HANKINS

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Bill Baker

Date: 3/17/2022 2:39:00 PM

Sounds like a fun trip, Paula. I need a vacation, but never get around to it. It's been over 10 years since my last one. Good Luck in the contest. Your friend, Bill

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/18/2022 12:57:00 PM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your good luck. Glad you like my fun vacation write. Vacations are magical. Sounds like you are long overdue for one. Have a blessed day/weekend..................

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 3/5/2022 5:47:00 PM

Good Luck in the contest Paula! Your Dream Vacation sounds like a very enjoyable cruise, a magical trip indeed. :)Paulette

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/6/2022 7:19:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your good luck. Glad you enjoyed this fun write. All vacations are magical. Have a blessed day..................

Debra L Brown

Date: 3/5/2022 4:31:00 PM

Hi Paula, I enjoyed your dream vacation. This sounded like a trip made for a queen. I don't think I would want to go home either. Good luck in the contest. Blessing ~ Debra

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/5/2022 5:23:00 PM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your good luck. Glad you like this vacation write. What!!! You mean I need to go home??? Have a blessed day..................