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My Dream Can'T Wait

I longed to share a dream with you A dream that was most sublime It was about the two of us But you said, “Another time!” And so alone, I nursed my dream Wanting so much to share Its depth of passion and desire But it seemed you didn’t care In time my dream lost its appeal And it lost its splendid hue There was nothing of its sweetness left Not a morsel to share with you Then one night you held me tight As fair romance filled the air “Tell me, my love, what was your dream?” How could I when nothing’s there? “A dream deferred” no longer yearns To be lived and brought to light Faded is its splendor now The mind’s eye without sight And slowly now, I break away From the circle of your arms My dream, you see, was dear to me Somehow you've lost your charm Garment of my identity It throbbed with rhythm and rhyme You had no time to hear my dreams "Love” can wait till another time Eileen Manassian Ghali

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/20/2014 8:59:00 PM
it is funny how it fades when not nurtured I understand completely, unfortunatly, but you have said it so well, you are a queen of emotions.
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Date: 2/8/2014 10:05:00 AM
WOW! I like this. It is awesome. i agree with you - Love cain't wait till another time. Many blessings to you... Lucilla
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/9/2014 2:52:00 PM
Lucilla...Thanks for the lovely visit, my dear. Yes....love can't wait....when someone waits.....too long.....love may pass him by. Hope all is well with you, my dear. Hugs
Date: 2/8/2014 8:08:00 AM
Good morning Eillen, I greet you from beneath the Mexican Sun.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/8/2014 9:19:00 AM
;-) May it shine down warmly on you and your sweetie...Sun...fun....romance....I wish you it all.....
Date: 2/8/2014 12:49:00 AM
Wow Wow Wow yet again!!! Here is a quote from a famous poet that reminds me somewhat of you! " If you were not a star, I would be in the dark salaam to your beauty, from one who misses your company." I will ket you guess!!!! :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/8/2014 9:18:00 AM
Oh......how thrilling...sweet...and rich. Is this Gibran? Rumi? Hafiz????? Saadi??? Please....let me know, Arthur. Thanks for sharing it with me. You are very dear....
Date: 2/7/2014 12:15:00 PM
Ahh captured nicely....baddddd timing on his part!!!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/8/2014 9:15:00 AM
Oh sweetie.....u got it!!! ;-) Love u sooooo much....
Date: 2/7/2014 8:40:00 AM
Wowzer, this is so well expressed! Straight up outstanding piece of writing.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/7/2014 8:53:00 AM
Great time so far.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/7/2014 8:43:00 AM
:) Hey...look who's here!!! :) WOW! Glad to have a visit from you, Richard. Hope you are having a good time...thanks for your lovely compliment.
Date: 2/7/2014 3:01:00 AM
“A dream deferred” no longer yearns To be lived and brought to light Faded is its splendor now The mind’s eye without sight What great lines Eileen. A wonderful poem!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/7/2014 3:07:00 AM
CONNIE! You've visited! I'm so so thrilled! Connie...could I tell you that I'm in absolute awe of the CONSTANZA. How did you come up with it???? OH...to have a poetry form named after you! Do you have any idea how AWESOME THAT IS!!!! I wrote a Constanza for Craig's contest. It sure was a challenge...but fun! Would you be so kind as to give it a read? Constanza Weeps! ;) Lovely form!!!! Thanks for this visit and the kind words. I'm honored.
Date: 2/6/2014 5:24:00 PM
great poem! you've told this story so well in rhyme and i love the way it ends. someone got what he deserved!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/7/2014 2:16:00 AM
:) Thank you, Ilene! I always love visits from you. So good to know that you enjoyed this read. Sometimes inspiration hits and you just have to STOP everything and get it all down. Some poems need work, but this just poured out of me. :) Thanks for the visit. Hugs
Date: 2/6/2014 12:07:00 PM
This is one of your best writings to date. Great descriptiveness and rhyming.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/7/2014 2:16:00 AM
WOW! Thanks ever so much, Robert. I know you call things as you see it. I appreciate the honesty here. I'm beaming.
Date: 2/6/2014 9:26:00 AM
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/7/2014 2:17:00 AM
THANKS, SWEETIE! LOVE THIS POST! SWEET AND TO THE POINT! HUGS
Date: 2/6/2014 7:33:00 AM
Very well put Eileen..I have many similar dreams. I hope we all can find love....Tim
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/7/2014 2:19:00 AM
Thanks, Tim. Glad to have this visit. Yes....love has many faces and goes through many stages. It needs nurture to grow...and commitment...and and and....No one ever said it would be easy....There needs to be a balance between love as a feeling (oh...where my emphasis lies) and love as a principle (a decision to love...the harder part). OH, put that all aside and play hide and seek! Maybe love will find us!
Date: 2/6/2014 6:45:00 AM
This poem kept me wondering of how its going to end..If they dreamt together happily after,or if they lead seperate paths..Excellent, Eileen.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/7/2014 2:14:00 AM
Hi gorgeous!!! Why don't we just wait and see! ;) Thanks for your visits and posts...friendship and love. I'm so blessed to have you in my life! Hugs

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