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My dream I had a dream that bliss didn't exist, and that searching and seeking this would only put my heart at risk...and i thought to myself....this is senseless, to go through life without the ultimate form of happiness? I couldn't fathom this, i felt hopeless, and then an angel walked up to me and asked if she could assist. I said, can you help me find what i so desperately miss? can you you fill my heart with what i believe to be priceless? Follow me she said, please i insist, i'll take you to a place where all things exist... As we got closer to the place my heart was at it's fullest, overwhelmed by the light so beautiful and endless... I dropped to my knees in a moment of weakness, no longer was i afraid, no longer did i feel hopeless... I had questions to ask so i couldn't resist, what ever happened to life with bliss? Can you please just grant me this one wish? I was taken back to a place in the wilderness, upset by the fact that i didn't receive my wishes... why are we here? where is my happiness? how can i find a life with bliss? She smiled at me and said you already have this... then immediately i was awakened by my wife  with a kiss.

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Date: 9/23/2012 6:56:00 PM
nice poem! may you relive that moment with ever kiss. warm thoughts, Ralph
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Date: 9/17/2012 2:10:00 PM
HI JAMEEL, ONCE AGAIN STOPPING BY THIS POEM..., congratulations with your awesome featured poem of the week... enjoy your day :-) PD
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Jameel Seymour
Date: 9/17/2012 5:15:00 PM
The fact that you took the time to not only read my poem, but commented means a great deal to me... being a novice to poetry, and the fact that you ate such a great writer, I'm humbled by the fact that you enjoyed it. Thank You!
Date: 9/13/2012 9:28:00 PM
Jameel, what a sweet awakening... .. enjoyed stopping by ;-) Have yourself a goodnight~ PD
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