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My Dream

tears fall from our eyes universal hugs of love peace reigns in our world Entry: "Any Poem About Dreams" (Old or New) Sponsor: P.D. 3rd Place Winner For the "Dream Land Contest" of "Olajide Adelana" By: Carol Brown 01/18/2012 7th Place Winner

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Quoth Theraven

Date: 5/1/2021 10:01:00 AM

No better dream than your 'universal hugs' in peace. A Fave... -Richard

William Hughes

Date: 3/31/2012 4:20:00 PM

Its so simple but so strong. wow.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/2/2012 8:49:00 AM

A beautiful dream to have Carol, and we can hope and pray for it to come true-- I'm so sorry about your poems, maybe the time had already passed before we could retrieve it? I'm sorry I didn't realize it sooner, but that is good to know you had saved some copies of your poems...wish you all the best, Carol! hugs :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/21/2012 7:56:00 AM

Thank you to all you exceptionally magnificent poets for your kind remarks. Love, Carol

Mario Diletto

Date: 2/20/2012 8:53:00 PM

congrats on your win...

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/20/2012 4:29:00 PM

Carol, beautiful Senryu. Congrats on making PD's winners' list....................S.Ronthorpe

Don Johnson

Date: 2/20/2012 4:03:00 PM

great win S C B..... well done here mate....

Jonas L. Rozario

Date: 2/20/2012 12:42:00 PM

Congrats on your win in the contest Carol.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/20/2012 3:57:00 AM

Congratulations Carol, a well deserved win xx

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/20/2012 12:01:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Carol. This is as well as anyone can write a senryu.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/19/2012 9:18:00 PM

congrats Carol on a great win for this amazing write so prolific .. one day maybe luv..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/19/2012 7:47:00 PM

lol.. Hi Carol, another wonderful win... now for me...... CONGRATUALTIONS! with your wonderful dreamy poem... thank you for supporting my contest ;-) ~ always*PD

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/27/2012 1:14:00 AM

carol..another wonderful win..always..pd

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/25/2012 5:58:00 PM

you took it in the other way of dream! very clever, Carol. Congrats on your win.

Sadaf Syed

Date: 1/25/2012 6:57:00 AM

Congratulations Carol:)

Christopher Bunton

Date: 1/24/2012 4:30:00 PM

Congratulations

Dan Kearley

Date: 1/24/2012 2:04:00 PM

Congrats! On the win with this fine write. :o)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/24/2012 1:44:00 PM

Thank you and congrats to you also. Love, Carol

Jay Loveless

Date: 1/24/2012 11:15:00 AM

Beautiful (: I love it

M.I.A .

Date: 1/20/2012 1:07:00 AM

aaaww, this is a beautiful senryu. a winner for me. good luck Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/18/2012 8:27:00 PM

ha ha! here i am bothering you one more time.. i want this dream land to.... in a world of peace,, i won't have no more tears.... thank you for sharing your wonderful poems... ta ta ta,..p.d.

Lucinda Cayton

Date: 1/18/2012 2:25:00 PM

universal love is love, God is love. It works. lovely well written friend. so glad I can be myself here again :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/18/2012 9:12:00 AM

Honey write. It's a great philosophy rests in finest Universal border, Needs devotion I do feel, bl

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/18/2012 8:52:00 AM

This is a great dream Carol! Peace would be really great, a great dream! Awesome Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/18/2012 6:08:00 AM

Lovely Carol.Good luck in the contest.I am in dreamland already :) - oxox love Anne-Lise