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My Downfall

My Downfall is the most difficult of them all. I love my husband but he has a hard time showing me the same. When he gets mad he call me cruel names. I love him with all my heart and i want our marriage to last. Our son deserve to grow with two loving parents . Not just one. In the beginning, we were inseparable. but that changed when we said " I Do" He feels as if he owns me and that i don't like . My downfall is falling in love.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/27/2010 10:21:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Khashana. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Wishing you a Happy New Year. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/17/2010 8:01:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope your time on the Soup will be fun and filled with sharing... check out the contests too.. good luck with luv..