Get Your Premium Membership

My Divine Petition

When I’ll see more people coming out of brothel than church, When I’ll see more people bending down to snort heroin than in worship in mosque, When I’ll see more people coming out of casino than synagogue, When I’ll see more people coming out of tavern than temple; When there will be no more water fit to drink, When there will be no more air fit to breathe, When there will be no more shades of the tree to rest the weary souls, When despair, distrust and darkness overwhelm hope, faith and light; I’ll beseech the wizards of the winds and the seas, And I’ll implore the prince and the princess of the stars and the planets, And I’ll apprise the lords of the thunder and lightning of all the ills of the land and the evil doings of its dwellers; And I’ll pray unto them To undo what they have created And to begin again! Don't fight it...write it contest by John lawless

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/22/2015 5:15:00 AM
Congrats
Login to Reply
Date: 8/22/2015 5:14:00 AM
Congrats on the number one spot
Login to Reply
Date: 8/17/2015 3:33:00 PM
Abdul, Congratulations on the DON'T FIGHT IT.....WRITE IT!! contest... SKAT
Login to Reply
Date: 8/16/2015 11:32:00 PM
Very wonderful take on theme abdul! Much deserved first place win! Big congrats!
Login to Reply
Malik Avatar
Abdul Malik
Date: 8/17/2015 12:34:00 PM
Thanks Upma.
Date: 8/16/2015 11:08:00 AM
Wow awesome write....calling for a total revival! system and mindset resurrection...... Congrats!!!!.....Anu
Login to Reply
Malik Avatar
Abdul Malik
Date: 8/16/2015 11:48:00 AM
Thanks Anulaxmi, appreciate your comments.
Date: 8/15/2015 6:07:00 PM
I can only agree with what Richard has written - lets hope one day we see a turn around:-( powerful pen Abdul congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
Malik Avatar
Abdul Malik
Date: 8/16/2015 11:50:00 AM
Thanks Jan. It's never gonna happen. We are not wired that way. We'll destroy ourselves and destroy most of the natural blessings.
Date: 8/15/2015 9:24:00 AM
Much of what you have written is true. We humans have made poor use of our free will and in the process have given ourselves to bondage. Somehow we have fooled ourselves into thinking it is freedom!
Login to Reply
Malik Avatar
Abdul Malik
Date: 8/16/2015 11:51:00 AM
Thanks Richard, I respect your thinking.

Book: Shattered Sighs