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My Devotion

Devotion is a very special word to me
All of mine belongs to my wife
She is my very soul you see
The forever-true love of my life
She removed all my pain and strife
Speaking on devotion all I can say
She is my every second of everyday

For Trudy's contest

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  1. Date: 11/16/2009 9:14:00 PM
    Very loving and warmly written..she must also hold you special in her heart...Sorry it took me so long to thank you on my past featured poem of several months ago..Thanks...lawrence ingle in lou. ky.

  1. Date: 9/1/2009 1:45:00 PM
    Brilliantly sweet! I will enjoy the day that I meet the man God destines for me to be with and for him to love me like that. Awesome write! Congratulations on your placement in Trudy's contest.

  1. Date: 9/1/2009 12:50:00 PM
    Beautiful poem, wonderful tribute to a wife, congrats. on your hight placement. Regards: Déirdre

  1. Date: 9/1/2009 8:11:00 AM
    The last line says it all! Congratulations my "hitting the books" friend!!~ Carrie

  1. Date: 9/1/2009 6:09:00 AM
    Congrad's on your BIG win Mike! Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/1/2009 3:26:00 AM
    Congratulations Michael on your win in Trudy's contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/1/2009 2:09:00 AM
    Congrats of your success in Trudy's contest Michael.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 8/31/2009 11:21:00 PM
    Michael, congratulations on your success in Trudy's contest...Raul

  1. Date: 8/31/2009 9:58:00 PM
    No wonder why this poem is among the winners! Excellent job, Michael. Kudos on your succes! Ruben.

  1. Date: 8/31/2009 9:54:00 PM
    Michael, Congratulation for placing in my first contest! Loved your poem of devotion to you lovely bride! ~Trudy~

  1. Date: 8/8/2009 5:37:00 PM
    Michael a very special tribute to your special lady, God bless with many years to come, Sincerely Moses

  1. Date: 8/8/2009 10:55:00 AM
    COUNT YOUR BLESSINGS. a good wife is indeed rare today. good luck in school study and do everything they say and you'll get all a's

  1. Date: 8/8/2009 9:08:00 AM
    Michael, may all of the women in this world find a love like what you have with your wife.... it is so amazingly beautiful how you write to and are inspired by her and your love of each other. Many many blessings and years to come for your writing and sharing with us. Hugs and I look forward to seeing your poem for the contest! I have to catch up with that today as my days went crazy a few weeks ago - recovery enroute. :) Off to enjoy the reading!

  1. Date: 8/7/2009 4:48:00 PM
    It is so inspiring to hear your love story, it is so apparent in every poem, that you have found true love. Love Carrie

  1. Date: 8/7/2009 3:08:00 PM
    Excellent love story you have going on here Michael. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/7/2009 1:32:00 PM
    Beautifully written of devotion. Sara