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My Destiny

Each day As if through night I walk, searching my way Holding in my hands, a flashlight eyes strained. Watching The road closely I stay on the small path Stepping over rocks, avoiding Ivy. But soon The flashlight dies I know I must go on Yet feel blind in pitch black night, I stop. I hear The night's music Around me like a voice That sings to me a melody Of love. I wait With my faith strong I know something will change And I raise my voice in response Clouds part. The moon Is then revealed I see the path clearly Before dawn I'll be where I belong, With thee. Cinquain Suite © CarolineCecile 04.29.12

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/3/2012 2:43:00 PM
A nice collection of cinquains to form a longer poem. Very well thought out and tied together. Lovely.
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Date: 5/3/2012 6:46:00 AM
thses are wonderful cinquain's Caroline, so profound, and sad, yet uplifting. harry
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Date: 5/2/2012 1:27:00 AM
Caroline C, great set of Cinquain's, love them..David
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