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My Demons

I'm without care, but not carefree Something dark has taken hold of me I want them close, but to leave me be My demons just might be my ecstasy

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 1/19/2019 9:14:00 PM

I love the ambiguity and layers in this one, and I can so relate ... beautiful structure and deep emotion. I thoroughly enjoyed this gem, my friend! Blessings! :-) <3

Just James

Date: 10/5/2018 12:46:00 AM

Life can be a paradox...great write!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2018 3:24:00 PM

a very interesting poem that can be taken different ways if you are speaking metaphorically. Well done.

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 8/19/2018 11:52:00 PM

The contradictions, very familiar. Very nice piece.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/19/2018 7:47:00 PM

Great contrasting lines "without care/carefree" and "close/leave me be" such an apt description of struggling with our demons! Well done - from one Michelle to another-

Silent One

Date: 5/30/2018 2:39:00 PM

Damn... I hope you can escape them..