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My Death Day

I'm awake. In a coffin. Watching you. You're sad, but Silently relieved. Now that I'm Dead you are Free to return to Normalcy. Though I can see You, love. Rigor mortis and all, Cold body, the icy pupils. I stare up at you, Waiting for a tear. But there is only a Smile from you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/21/2013 10:58:00 AM
Ian, love it, specially 'the waiting for a tear', well done, thnx a lot for your uplifting comment on my poem which I expected to not get appreciated much here..
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Date: 4/20/2013 12:04:00 PM
Very nice poem. Enjoyed the read.
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