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My Dearest

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My Dearest

I held her cold hand
She silently slipped away 
I sank into tears
Her gift is on the table 
I wrapped it myself, today.

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  1. Date: 1/19/2014 6:43:00 PM
    You have tugged on the heart strings with this piece and left us wondering. Congrats.

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 4:42:00 PM
    Really leaves one wondering what happened....awesome win...

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 3:51:00 PM
    Johnathon, the last line is the one that really struck me. So poignant!! Congrats for your win.

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 8:30:00 AM
    Congrats on your win. This packs a punch. Your sadness seeps into all hearts.

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 7:19:00 AM
    Oh my this touches the heart and hits the soul hard, congratulations on your win Jona xxx

  1. Date: 11/29/2013 11:03:00 PM
    Sad and gripping! Nice Tanka Jonathan.