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My Dear Poetry Soup Member, Pleased to know some of you enjoyed the piece I wrote "Just like November." I just want to forever light up a room like a burning ember. I'm striving to be a talent people can look back on and remember. By now most of you know I'm incarcerated. But when you prejudge me it makes me sad and frustrated. My back is against the wall and I have already been checkmated. So avoiding me totally makes me feel discriminated. Get to know me, I promise I'm not contaminated. I just long for love and to feel appreciated. Sincerely, Poetry Soups convict Jimmy Note: Written for Brian Strands contest "My Dear."

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Date: 11/27/2009 9:37:00 AM
Jimmy this is so beautiful and relates a beautiful spirit u have... u are a wonderful talent and enjoy communicating with u .. u are loved by your Poetry Soup Family... we appreciate, respect, and enjoy your words... blessings ... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/23/2009 12:39:00 PM
Hi Jimmy, kool rhyme. I do hope All Souper's welcome you to this great community, as i wrote in my poem about you, we have all made mistakes, i look forward to reading your writes of now and writes of tomorrow, as you are going to be here long after today. So bring them on " Poetry Soups newest Jimmy " definately not a convict in my eyes >> The Highlander >> James
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Date: 11/23/2009 7:18:00 AM
Good luck in Brian's "My Dear..." Contest! ...Soup Mail
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Date: 11/18/2009 1:06:00 PM
Wow! I'm glad I read this because I think I allowed myself to get confused by the rules of this contest. I think you can be blessed by this and really cry at the same time. I feel your heart in this. This is a real winner for Brian's contest. Reading this, I'm really glad that I finally responded to your soup mail. I think I was only thinking about myself.
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Date: 11/18/2009 11:16:00 AM
I know that I appreciate you sharing your heart and your gifts, Jimmy! Great rhyme you have here. I wish you the best in Brian's contest. Hugs, Donna
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Date: 11/18/2009 10:46:00 AM
I am sure we have all done things, that if we had gotten caught we would be right their with you. You mention the key word "Love" that is the one thing will make all the difference in the world. God bless, Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 11/18/2009 12:10:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Jimmy.Rgds Brian
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Date: 11/17/2009 8:43:00 PM
Hi, Jimmy. I still don't know how to send a Soup mail to a fellow poet. Maybe you'll teach me. I was born in Bucharest, Romania. I lived half of my life there and half in California. My last name is pronouned as you see it phonetically. Nice rhyme here, dear Jimmy. Love, Iolanda
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Date: 11/17/2009 4:59:00 PM
Jimmy, Love the sincerity of this letter. Written straight from your heart. I look forward to our growing friendship here on the soup and wish you the best of luck in Brian's contest! Truly enjoyed. I look forward to your poems, so keep writing okay! Thanks for sharing..Smile. Love Light Patty
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Date: 11/17/2009 3:40:00 PM
An excellent write and expression from a truly tender heart. Best wishes to you in the contest. Your honesty of character shines through your writing. Well done my friend. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 11/17/2009 1:26:00 PM
We have all done things we could be jailed for ;) just luck and money, race, and education have been on some of our sides and not others. Nice write good luck in the contest! Light & Love
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Date: 11/17/2009 1:07:00 PM
i know just where you're coming from, my friend. i too have been done that road and my prayers are with you. your a great talent by the way. keep writing and we'll keep reading.
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Date: 11/17/2009 1:00:00 PM
No one will judge you?Who are we to judge you?If i would be in your position i would have acted like you or maybe worse..Who said We are somehow better,God only is perfect,all of us are all the same,We all make mistakes,yet we all can pray forgivness to our God for that im grateful,consider myself lucky,you are one of Us ,our brother and friend and We Care--Charma
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Date: 11/17/2009 12:43:00 PM
Jimmy, actually i didnt know your situation. I always wondered what the # after your name was all about. Keep writing, Ill keep reading. Good luck to you and may good come from this. BG
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