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My Deal With the Devil

With a deafening thunder and blazing lightning, Amidst a swirling clouds of dark ominous smoke, He appeared suddenly smack in front of me-- A most hideous being who appeared neither human nor a beast. With the swift sleight of hand, Before I could even cry out: Stop it. Oh God, please stop He plucked my heart out and held it in his hairy filthy hand. Oh, why he has to take it out? My only possession, my only wealth, The only thing that beat against my frail, long worn-out chest, Assuring its constant company in this lonely journey of my life. But heedless of my pleadings, He tossed my heart into the gutter with a gut-wrenching laugh! I asked this foul fiend: Who art thou? Why did thou taketh my heart away? With a guttural voice he spoke thus: I am the devil! Lord of the Hell, I am the impetus that steers the course of affairs in this world; With me on your side, You'll get the most out of a strife. With Adam, the first man, I came hither and residing since. An ardent companion of those who coveteth glory in life He bent down, And with his flaming eyes peered into mine, Spitting foul breath into my face, he sneered: But this heart! Ha, this heart is a hindrance, A barrier, the core of love and humility, Where you feel the joys and woes of life. Nah, there's no need for it. Not in this world, Where the mind reigns supreme; Not in this age, Where vices prevail unrestrained-- The age of decadence, KALIYUGA!* He half turned to go, But then he paused, Turned back and looked at me. Never have I seen such a heavenly sight, Now transformed into an angel, He extended gracefully his milky-white delicate hand And whispered softly on the breath of the breeze: Give me thy soul... And I will give thee this world! ~Dark Poetry contest by Nayda Ivette Negron
*(KALI-YUGA- Age of vice, is the last of four stages the world goes through as part of the cycle of yugas (ages) described in the Sanskrit Scriptures - an era of decay in values and the consequent havoc.)

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Date: 11/18/2015 4:39:00 PM
Wow! congratulations, your pen took me on a rollercoaster of dark, dynamite ending..:), jill
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Abdul Malik
Date: 11/18/2015 5:01:00 PM
Watch out! I have made a deal with the devil!!! lol. Thanks for your comments.
Date: 11/18/2015 7:31:00 AM
Hi Abdul. I've heard about the Kali Yuga. I hope we make a speedy recovery to higher consciousness... Congrats for your #1 placement! ;-)
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Abdul Malik
Date: 11/18/2015 5:04:00 PM
If you have heard of the Kaliyuga, then you must also know that..............there's no recovery! Maybe, yes, to a higher consciousness. But we WILL pay a price. Thanks for your comments.
Date: 11/16/2015 9:08:00 PM
Wonderful win. SKAT
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Date: 11/16/2015 1:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your big win :)
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Abdul Malik
Date: 11/16/2015 5:52:00 PM
Thanks Victoria.
Date: 11/16/2015 9:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win on this chilling poem. Yes, the Devil DOES know human nature! Janice
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Abdul Malik
Date: 11/16/2015 10:40:00 AM
That's for sure Janice, and the devil told me to tell you so! lol
Date: 11/16/2015 8:57:00 AM
Congrats Abdul ! A sneering devil worse than Milton's!
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Abdul Malik
Date: 11/16/2015 10:40:00 AM
You may be right. I might have Milton's Paradise Lost and Paradise Regained and Dante's The Divine Comedy on the back of my mind. We studied them in our Literature class. Or, maybe, the devil resides in our subconscious?!
Date: 11/16/2015 8:03:00 AM
Congratulations in your first placement.
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Abdul Malik
Date: 11/16/2015 10:35:00 AM
Thanks Nayda, probably you are familiar with my predicament. Maybe you have dealt with the devil yourself? lol. Appreciate very much.
Date: 11/14/2015 3:37:00 AM
a somber portrait brushed with great images,abdul... well done!..hugggs
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Abdul Malik
Date: 11/14/2015 4:39:00 PM
So, you are an accessory after the fact, an accessory to the deal I made with the devil! Thanks nette.

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