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My Dead Life

I'm used to being hurt. By other people, and myself. Never by you. It hurts to know you don't like me, but it kills me to know you hate me. I don't know why but I still love you. Say what you want but we both know I would go to the end of the world to make you happy, even if that includes me losing my self. The only way for my heart to cry is for me to bleed. I don't bleed because you hate me. I bleed because, I know I can never have you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/13/2011 9:08:00 PM
Good right? i wrote this when i was twelve, I'm thirteen now. and this write it still nothing but true.
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Date: 12/15/2010 1:54:00 PM
Thank you guys for the comments it means alot.
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Date: 12/12/2010 5:50:00 AM
can feel the hurt and raw emotions
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Date: 12/11/2010 3:20:00 PM
It's quiet raging and pouring thoughts You have expressed so well, sara
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Date: 12/11/2010 2:30:00 PM
A wonderful out-pour of emotion, Sara. It is good to know that there are still persons who would make any sacrifice to make someone else happy. Thank you and welcome to Poetrysoup!
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Date: 12/11/2010 6:09:00 AM
Love can be the cruelest thing. The very thing you want may not be possible due to the other person's desires. Very strongly felt, nicely written.
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Date: 12/11/2010 3:57:00 AM
How powerful your feelings are,Sara.Modern write
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