My Daydream Follows

my daydream follows naked butterfly watching cold winter sunset

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/28/2015 12:20:00 PM

Well, it has been cold lately in the eastern USA where I am! You have expressed a sense of longing for some warmth. It is a very touching and thoughtful image. Thank-you for it! You have made my day!

Monterey Sirak

Date: 2/28/2015 8:56:00 AM

Only three lines, Rajat, but they made me think. In life we send our dreams racing merrily along in the warm sunshine, only to run into a cold front. We are left much like the butterfly, stripped and stunned, waiting for the thaw. Well done! Very unique.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2015 11:07:00 PM

this one is a very interesting image, Rajat!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/26/2015 1:58:00 PM

:) I hope your dreams are nice ones, Rajat! Lovely...I love butterflies...I didn't know they were naked! ;) Hugs