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My Day As a Woman

When I awoke, a woman I'd become The spirit of many, contained in one Strength and beauty, mystical tears Magical entity, who hated mirrors Looking at reflection, I seen my flaws Yet in the background, I heard much applause Others seen me, with much different eyes I listened to their voices, discarded my lies The blood of creation, flowed in my veins A brave warrior, a vision with brains Nurture and strength, complicated friend Passion personified, a master of pretend Layers of lovely, deeper than a well If you love me, I have a secret to tell Loyal and fierce, sometimes hiding my face Push me to far, I'll be gone without a trace My day had ended, time to go to bed Still words unspoken need to be said Yet in the end I turn back into a man Enriched by women, I am who I am In honour of women on their special day By: Richard Lamoureux

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Eve Roper

Date: 7/19/2015 1:18:00 AM

You make a lovely woman, Rick, congratulations on your win Sir. Hugs Eve

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/19/2015 7:03:00 AM

Ha ha, thanks although I don't think I am strong enough to survive more than one metaphorical day.

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 7/17/2015 1:04:00 PM

Awesome that you made it into the contest, deserving so! Congrats, made me smile as much as last time I read : ) ....bet you glad your not a woman. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/17/2015 2:59:00 PM

I must say I do enjoy being a man. I'm sure being a woman holds it's own advantages as well. Thanks for visiting.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/15/2015 10:40:00 AM

What an excellent, insightful piece, Rick! I am so impressed - only an exceptional man could have written this so very well! Kudos to you, my friend! I enjoyed it and love it; congratulations on your win! Pandita

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/15/2015 10:58:00 AM

Thanks Pandita, you have made me blush.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/15/2015 4:37:00 AM

many congrats Richard I remember reading this wonderful poem before :-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/15/2015 7:43:00 AM

Thanks Jan.

Lee Carter

Date: 7/15/2015 12:15:00 AM

Lol this made me laugh , very funny that you got in! Love the poem congrats on your womaness win!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/15/2015 7:43:00 AM

She is a good sport for adding me to the list.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 7/15/2015 12:03:00 AM

A poet and a poem this good deserves to be honored once again... Congrats on the win, Rick!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/15/2015 7:44:00 AM

You are kind, thanks Kelly.

Skat A

Date: 7/14/2015 11:46:00 PM

Richard, congratulations on your win. **SKAT**

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/15/2015 7:44:00 AM

Thanks SKAT

Amy Green

Date: 5/3/2014 7:42:00 AM

Wonderful entry for the contest, I really enjoyed this.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/3/2014 7:50:00 AM

Thanks Amy.

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday

Date: 4/19/2014 12:04:00 PM

astounding and so much Richard Lamoureux from PS! Received your SM and on my way to see after it. Takes some time but we'll fix it up! Hugs, Hanitra

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/19/2014 12:15:00 PM

Hello Hanitra, it would be such a thrill knowing you would have my book in your hands. I have always felt a kinship with your lovely spirit.

Skat A

Date: 4/16/2014 6:00:00 PM

RICHARD, Congratulations, enjoyed stopping by. Luv ~SKAT~

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/16/2014 6:01:00 PM

Thanks SKAT

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/15/2014 9:56:00 AM

I applaud your bravery, and insight in writing this poem........It takes a real man to step in our shoes for a moment.....this is the way of understanding, and respecting someone other than ourselves.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/15/2014 9:58:00 AM

Aww thanks Carrie.

Herzel Poshiwa

Date: 4/15/2014 6:05:00 AM

This is a beautiful poem, Well written (Just like any woman would)..lol...Great write....

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/15/2014 8:07:00 AM

Ha ha, thanks!

Paul Callus

Date: 4/15/2014 4:01:00 AM

Had to stop by and read this poem....a field where no man dares tread!! // congrats for the beautiful write...and the honour of being accepted by the female community:) // paul

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/15/2014 8:06:00 AM

This is a pleasant surprise, I can think of no higher honour.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 4/15/2014 2:26:00 AM

I am happy that you were inspired by my contest theme, but, because of the rules, I decided to give you an honorable mention. This poem does deserve a much higher placement, though! It was a very creative and beautiful write, Richard! Congratulations on your win!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/15/2014 8:05:00 AM

I am thrilled Kelly, you have made my day.

Amy Green

Date: 4/15/2014 2:13:00 AM

That was great! At first I was laughing my ass off - but the ending, "Yet in the end I turn back into a man Enriched by women, I am who I am" really makes this poem what it is, aside from the humor. Excellent piece.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/15/2014 8:04:00 AM

Thankyou Amy, you are kind.

John Loving Iii

Date: 4/14/2014 10:51:00 AM

p.s. i looked up what you said about the passion of christ. I'm glad that someone could at least explain that if that were true our souls would be lost. the beauty of this is i don't have to explain it to you.your muse told you so. so once again I'll just say that this piece deserves my highest seal of approval. yours JOHN HENRY LOVING III

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/14/2014 10:58:00 AM

I believe my inspiration flows from my heavenly Father so I rejoice in the stream of his endless creativity. Thanks again for your thoughtful feedback.

John Loving Iii

Date: 4/14/2014 10:45:00 AM

as they say over the water, A1. this is a masterpiece!!!! it is rare to come across a piece like this one and that is why I'll fav it. It was filled with so much truth and humor and horrible truth about women. to say you were insightful is a short statement. as i read it i knew that you had a muse guiding your hand. the words were put together so well. and the rhyming was excelent. a sure winner in the contest number 1 i am sure. if not i'd like to see the piece that was better. running out ...

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/14/2014 10:56:00 AM

This is one of the reason we as poets write, so that we can connect with another soul in a meaningful way. This comment truly make my day. Thank you John.